a solid little intro - having some knowledge of the tools used while investigating paranormal activity i would have liked some more technical terms from the picture, but if this is slated to be a family conducting their own investigation, then it works well.
Definitely excited to see the follow up parts.
Also, if you're ever working on some new shorts, I've been dying to get a bit deeper into screenwriting asstance, so if you're ever facing some script issues, contact me - I'd love the chance to do some writing work with you!